Feed back for the Film by my peers

The pacing of some scenes could have been cut down, I think it was focused too much on the pace of the music that it took effect on the pace of the video itself. So yea as you said some scenes could have been shortened and it would still be effective. The pacing of some scenes could have been cut down, I think it was focused too much on the pace of the music that it took effect on the pace of the video itself. So yea as you said some scenes could have been shortened and it would still be effective, or like flashback scenes.
the flow of that scene could have been better like it fades into motion rather than cut to it being clear instantly .
Yea its a song you could hear quite often
But overall it was very emotional especially in a woman perspective
Her preproduction stuff is very thorough and she did her research it even to the light testing and hue colour
For the cinematography i especially like her scene where she lays down on the bed and then it transitions into water. That scene is especially really nicely down, it flowed well, especially since water is shown as blue and her choice of blue colours.
Her even her body position where she is curled into a ball to represent her feeling little or kept within?
she could have improved the way showing the dresses and idea of elegant.
I could understand the narration and story idea, like the unravelling of clothes is the feeling of stripping oneself.
The lipstick scene though I could not see enough smudge when you wipe it with your hands but other than that the rest of the makeup was fine. So like it was not as effective as maybe shown through your preproduction.
The focus jumps - making it look messy
We said that the song choice was cliche and that maybe it was more of a music video than a short film.

I defiantly agree with some of the feed back, like the one about the focus jumping in the bath scene, I should have checked the focus on the camera was set before filming. The make up scene was defiantly lacking as you couldn't really see much of the make up smudge.

The film doesn't really look like a short film more like a music video which was what I was aiming for in the first place.

Although I do think the film came out pretty good, I defiantly had fun making it both the producing and acting.

5-6min film project

Confirm copying